Comments+on+Jen's+Revisions

Hi Jen, I don't know why I can't edit your page,so I wrote my comments in a new page.

COMMENTS I like your revision to the introduction. Your introduction makes this task be much easier to understand. Your revised directions are clearly written and easy-to-follow. The only thing that I changed was about the third step – Writing Phase. I think it needs some more specific guidance, because maybe your students do not know how to write “Convincing Argument”. --- QI